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Flashing c o l o r s, and ongoing music it hits me in the face like a wave of static electricity. The ecstacy strikes my taste buds like sugar and neuro toxins dancing on my tongue. The smell is foul of puke and ***** Teens are raving, while the music is playing. Grinding against one another like a mortar and pestle. Watching an influenced man try to get with a vulnerable women. Taking advantage of every drop off alcohol that goes into the women’s veins, there is no blood left, just firewater.
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Dec 5, 2013
Dec 5, 2013 at 7:06 PM UTC
The Rave
Flashing c o l o r s, and ongoing music it hits me in the face like a wave of static electricity. The ecstacy strikes my taste buds like sugar and neuro toxins dancing on my tongue. The smell is foul of puke and ***** Teens are raving, while the music is playing. Grinding against one another like a mortar and pestle. Watching an influenced man try to get with a vulnerable women. Taking advantage of every drop off alcohol that goes into the women’s veins, there is no blood left, just firewater.
emily-mary
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Dec 5, 2013
Dec 5, 2013 at 7:06 PM UTC
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