Code blue!
You played the siren for me
And I left my heart in the back of your ambulance 

Code blue?
Healthcare is here to save the day:
Fill me with holes
And let the auction begin

Someone else is now walking about
With my inner parts
I&#39;m of a mind to sue
But you took that too

Carlo-C-Gomez

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richard-shepherd

Oh, yes! Fantastico! Made me think about the kids game Operation and the naff commercials, &quot;Here goes the funny bone&quot;, but you may not of had them in the states

cj-sutherland

If people really knew how many life-threatening dangerous errors are made in the name of medicine Doctor Who practice on us. I was in a car accident two years ago T-bone The car rolled five times took out a telephone pole a transformer and I was upside down unconscious. They got me out of the car. The windows were shattered. They had to pry open a place to get me out. I had no broken bones no cuts the ambulance said since I don’t have any visual injuries, although my head was pounding and I was seeing double if I want, I could not go to the hospital I went to the hospital in an ambulance. how do I not gone? I would’ve died. I had blood on my brain pretty serious, but the ambulance was willing to let me go home cause I didn’t have a car. Four doctors told me I was lucky to be alive. Yeah our healthcare from top to bottom has issues, but it’s not all the government. It’s people who are not trained correctly posing as a medical staff that’s not qualified. I was also misdiagnosed with two things that are listed now on my record, but the doctor said they never tested for that. It was a completely different area now I have to fight to get it off of my medical record. People don’t even know what’s on their chart on their medical record. Lots of errors I could go on and on, but thank you for sharing this poem. It was a good funny you’re brilliant.

MidnightVerse

Code blue, holes filled, inner parts auctioned off and now your mind too – the complete healthcare experience in one poem. That last line is devastating in the best way.

ParadoxicalPenguin

I&#39;m of a mind to sue but you took that too&#39;... Carlo, that closing line is absolutely surgical. You&#39;ve dismantled the entire healthcare system in twelve lines and somehow made it funny. Brilliant stuff.

VerseBuster

Man, you deliver this with that trademark deadpan, the kind of satire that laughs on the surface but bleeds underneath. A sharp, clever piece.

JupiterAscending

lovely poem. i hope you can find the parts missing

-ap-

Cuts to the bone! Enjoyable and far too true!