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“Though my soul may set in darkness, it will rise in perfect light. I have loved the stars too fondly to be fearful of the night.” I don the belt of old Orion and sit atop the great winged Pegasus. I steal riches from cunning Copernicus and sing ballads to the lonely new moon. Look there - my bride! Oh fair Andromeda; She bears our band fashioned from Saturn’s rings. Her dress woven from strands of silk stardust, we read our vows to the watching planets and kiss under the sun’s jealous blaze. Starstruck, we ride, comets trailing in our wake.
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Dec 3, 2013
Dec 3, 2013 at 2:10 PM UTC
Starstruck (Inspired by The Old Astronomer by Sarah Williams)
“Though my soul may set in darkness, it will rise in perfect light. I have loved the stars too fondly to be fearful of the night.” I don the belt of old Orion and sit atop the great winged Pegasus. I steal riches from cunning Copernicus and sing ballads to the lonely new moon. Look there - my bride! Oh fair Andromeda; She bears our band fashioned from Saturn’s rings. Her dress woven from strands of silk stardust, we read our vows to the watching planets and kiss under the sun’s jealous blaze. Starstruck, we ride, comets trailing in our wake.
This is my first attempt at a blank verse poem that I did for my poetry class. I was inspired by my favorite poem of all time written by Sarah Williams, The Old Astronomer. The iambic pentameter certainly isn't perfect, but I had fun writing it.
raymond-johnson
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Dec 3, 2013
Dec 3, 2013 at 2:10 PM UTC
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