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If only others understood that this culture is not of whiteness nor of money nor of oppression—but of humanity free and will combined for thee... then I want to be Western . I want to be free. my message I say. (for them who deceive for they are deceived) Why are you a bigot? asked out of need Who broke the chains? and Who ended hate? I ASK FOR WHAT NEED? fought death, seen fate? why ask right or wrong? why confess his bad deeds? for his humanity was shouted loud and clear? he asked the other how has he been~ known he is Who ate the fruit and broke the rule weak has he been~ he confessed and pleaded my lord free free. he was suffering for the world is many things neither pure nor clear. --- now he built a house in which he lives free, on them lands he called men now talk free, and act free. rules they made for safety for wellbeing were all indeed, alive and trusting with flaming innocence in shining eyes, pure are them hearts fully lit with love lacked greed then them lands became green wet never before seen. it were from the midst of hell was now redeemed?, it was a garden small but clean where love has became main and clear hated sin away out of fear yet she was hated by the world, for it only bears the fruits in need; for she is alive and her children were neither rotten nor seized. That garden was Love, and her Lord, is the one we need. His love was given for his children assured them (FOR FREE) eternity is him always was and will be, for his heart is love he made us the children of his all free for you must never claim his name, if your heart is full of need. slave you are for something false indeed.
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May 22
May 22, 2026 at 8:23 PM UTC
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If only others understood that this culture is not of whiteness nor of money nor of oppression—but of humanity free and will combined for thee... then I want to be Western . I want to be free. my message I say. (for them who deceive for they are deceived) Why are you a bigot? asked out of need Who broke the chains? and Who ended hate? I ASK FOR WHAT NEED? fought death, seen fate? why ask right or wrong? why confess his bad deeds? for his humanity was shouted loud and clear? he asked the other how has he been~ known he is Who ate the fruit and broke the rule weak has he been~ he confessed and pleaded my lord free free. he was suffering for the world is many things neither pure nor clear. --- now he built a house in which he lives free, on them lands he called men now talk free, and act free. rules they made for safety for wellbeing were all indeed, alive and trusting with flaming innocence in shining eyes, pure are them hearts fully lit with love lacked greed then them lands became green wet never before seen. it were from the midst of hell was now redeemed?, it was a garden small but clean where love has became main and clear hated sin away out of fear yet she was hated by the world, for it only bears the fruits in need; for she is alive and her children were neither rotten nor seized. That garden was Love, and her Lord, is the one we need. His love was given for his children assured them (FOR FREE) eternity is him always was and will be, for his heart is love he made us the children of his all free for you must never claim his name, if your heart is full of need. slave you are for something false indeed.
YOU TAKE YOUR NOTES.
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May 22
May 22, 2026 at 8:23 PM UTC
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