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You say love you and like a normal person I respond with "love you too" and I mean it but do you? Love is something I easily fall for I'm like a fish falling for bait the smallest things excite me Do you remember our first date? Oh, how I loved it a day in the woods alone with you! I brought the basket with food since I knew you would forget to its ok you told me you loved me We sat and I ate you sat and you stared like something was on my face "Is there something on my face?" "No love other than beauty and perfection there is nothing else" After that day we went on date after date always to that place each day, you'd enlighten me making me fall harder Christmas came and I wake up to you text "Hey date at 10pm our place" Before then I had all day to spend with my family we watched movies baked cookies like any normal family would do 10 came and like always I brought the basket of food because I know you would forget to This time was different though you lead me further into the woods than we normally go but its ok I trust you since I love you too While I place our things down, I notice you're not around "turn around" you say you're on one knee my heart racing You pull a box so small but its ok I still love you As it opens there's a pill "take it.." you whisper "Why..?" I ask softly "don't you love me don't you trust me?" "I do love you I do trust you!" "Take it then because I love you" I know I shouldn't but I did anyway and as I sat there nervously for nothing happened I had set my guard up for nothing "Now no one will hear you." I try to speak nothing comes out I yell still nothing... for that pill did do something after all slowly but surely he pulls a small dagger from his pocket "I never loved you I just thought it be fun to see who wins this game" I back away as tears roll from my eyes for this man who told me he loved it was all just a lie? Why? There was nothing else I could do so I sat there by the tree as he sharpened his dagger He crept closer "Anything you wish to say?" That angered me for I could not speak but with the smallest voice I was able to say my last words "I love you too" Days later NEWS PAPER MAN FOUND DEAD IN WOODS "I LOVE YOU TOO" WRITEN WITH BLOOD ON HIM Yes I might be dead now, but I still got my revenge cuz I loved him too...when he was alive anyways..
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May 15
May 15, 2026 at 12:41 AM UTC
"I Love you too"
You say love you and like a normal person I respond with "love you too" and I mean it but do you? Love is something I easily fall for I'm like a fish falling for bait the smallest things excite me Do you remember our first date? Oh, how I loved it a day in the woods alone with you! I brought the basket with food since I knew you would forget to its ok you told me you loved me We sat and I ate you sat and you stared like something was on my face "Is there something on my face?" "No love other than beauty and perfection there is nothing else" After that day we went on date after date always to that place each day, you'd enlighten me making me fall harder Christmas came and I wake up to you text "Hey date at 10pm our place" Before then I had all day to spend with my family we watched movies baked cookies like any normal family would do 10 came and like always I brought the basket of food because I know you would forget to This time was different though you lead me further into the woods than we normally go but its ok I trust you since I love you too While I place our things down, I notice you're not around "turn around" you say you're on one knee my heart racing You pull a box so small but its ok I still love you As it opens there's a pill "take it.." you whisper "Why..?" I ask softly "don't you love me don't you trust me?" "I do love you I do trust you!" "Take it then because I love you" I know I shouldn't but I did anyway and as I sat there nervously for nothing happened I had set my guard up for nothing "Now no one will hear you." I try to speak nothing comes out I yell still nothing... for that pill did do something after all slowly but surely he pulls a small dagger from his pocket "I never loved you I just thought it be fun to see who wins this game" I back away as tears roll from my eyes for this man who told me he loved it was all just a lie? Why? There was nothing else I could do so I sat there by the tree as he sharpened his dagger He crept closer "Anything you wish to say?" That angered me for I could not speak but with the smallest voice I was able to say my last words "I love you too" Days later NEWS PAPER MAN FOUND DEAD IN WOODS "I LOVE YOU TOO" WRITEN WITH BLOOD ON HIM Yes I might be dead now, but I still got my revenge cuz I loved him too...when he was alive anyways..
NOT TRUE GUYS Just a reminder that even you loved ones can hurt you
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May 15
May 15, 2026 at 12:41 AM UTC
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