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Dear T----, Your heart was an aquarium stocked with languid jellyfish - those who tested the waters were brushed with stings that left red welts wide as fingers. Seven bars told us not to come back after you went wild and green; I missed the hunter's bar most of all, where you shattered a pint glass after a blonde waitress winked; she was blithe, even innocent; you never cared - everyone lit your subatomic fuse. Now I hear you've married, maybe doing better; no more are you the scorpion fossil in the amber of my recollection. I still tell people a little of you, your crucifying betrayal with the storybook man. Ah, but that's how it so often goes: death-engined trainwrecks meeting on a bridge trestle - neither of us escaped unscathed. You captured one of the best years of my life in your eager swallows, but it ended in an emergency room. Despite it all, I hope you're well, Respectfully, Evan
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May 13
May 13, 2026 at 8:45 AM UTC
Letter to T----
Dear T----, Your heart was an aquarium stocked with languid jellyfish - those who tested the waters were brushed with stings that left red welts wide as fingers. Seven bars told us not to come back after you went wild and green; I missed the hunter's bar most of all, where you shattered a pint glass after a blonde waitress winked; she was blithe, even innocent; you never cared - everyone lit your subatomic fuse. Now I hear you've married, maybe doing better; no more are you the scorpion fossil in the amber of my recollection. I still tell people a little of you, your crucifying betrayal with the storybook man. Ah, but that's how it so often goes: death-engined trainwrecks meeting on a bridge trestle - neither of us escaped unscathed. You captured one of the best years of my life in your eager swallows, but it ended in an emergency room. Despite it all, I hope you're well, Respectfully, Evan
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May 13
May 13, 2026 at 8:45 AM UTC
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