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I was buried in Mount Savalan— With eyes wide open, sealed in a coffin; Within the pitch black coffin, laid I— beneath the bright white shroud, stood you. I was buried in Mount Savalan— The caves hold their breath in a prayer of stone; The hushed mist, a holy incense; The lake, a mirror for none but the skies, reflecting he who never forgets. I was buried in Mount Savalan— The shepherds carry the summit in their stride, moving like shadows across the scree; Their songs, the salt of the earth, their hands, gnarled roots of the slope. Savalan is buried inside us all— burrowed into souls as water once carved the summit's stones; His peaks forged in ancient roots—I welcome his dust to gnaw on my bones.
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Apr 30
Apr 30, 2026 at 8:42 AM UTC
I was Buried in Mount Savalan
I was buried in Mount Savalan— With eyes wide open, sealed in a coffin; Within the pitch black coffin, laid I— beneath the bright white shroud, stood you. I was buried in Mount Savalan— The caves hold their breath in a prayer of stone; The hushed mist, a holy incense; The lake, a mirror for none but the skies, reflecting he who never forgets. I was buried in Mount Savalan— The shepherds carry the summit in their stride, moving like shadows across the scree; Their songs, the salt of the earth, their hands, gnarled roots of the slope. Savalan is buried inside us all— burrowed into souls as water once carved the summit's stones; His peaks forged in ancient roots—I welcome his dust to gnaw on my bones.
not going to lie, I came up with this as I was listening to "I was Buried in Mount Pleasant Cemetery" by Woods of Ypres. decided to add my own personal and "patriotic" spin to a good starter line. Mount Savalan (of Azerbaijan region in Iran) seemed like the perfect candidate to exercise poetic freedom on.
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25/M/Tabriz, Iran
Apr 30
Apr 30, 2026 at 8:42 AM UTC
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