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Twisted in a room of borrowed identity, I asked myself- Who am I? Boisterous yelling out and silence all delved in, " I am whoever that someone's eyes decide." Twisted between the enigmatic lies, I greet myself everyday- Once as 'Me', and once as 'You', and neither one really felt true. Twisted again in the vague of hopes, Asked myself- "which version of me did I reveal?" The one that laughs, the one that cares, The one that turns pebbles upside down, Or, the one that disappears there after? Twisted and more twisted, I finally realised, I don't actually exist unless someone is actually looking I am in a crowd of borrowed identity, Since the name's neither mine nor yours.
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Apr 19
Apr 19, 2026 at 10:58 AM UTC
I,Me and You?
Twisted in a room of borrowed identity, I asked myself- Who am I? Boisterous yelling out and silence all delved in, " I am whoever that someone's eyes decide." Twisted between the enigmatic lies, I greet myself everyday- Once as 'Me', and once as 'You', and neither one really felt true. Twisted again in the vague of hopes, Asked myself- "which version of me did I reveal?" The one that laughs, the one that cares, The one that turns pebbles upside down, Or, the one that disappears there after? Twisted and more twisted, I finally realised, I don't actually exist unless someone is actually looking I am in a crowd of borrowed identity, Since the name's neither mine nor yours.
#self love # everyday thoughts
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20/M/Tripura, India
Apr 19
Apr 19, 2026 at 10:58 AM UTC
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