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Newly married at twenty-three to my lovely, lonely first wife, I filled my countless weekends cutting up thick-barked deadfall, hefting logs meant for two into Jake's bonfire where we poured motor oil drained from his Jeep until the brawly flames reared four stories tall and melted bottles. I remember little after that until the clock clipped three and the bonfire stopped whistling from its dwindling amber heart - I had to excuse myself into the soft-shadow trees, missed my footing and fell into a dark, bristling beak of lawn that swallowed me whole & as I lay there voices called me, called me from car dome lights that flickered on like wrong stars, laughing that it was all over now, the party was all over now: just go home, just go home.
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Apr 18
Apr 18, 2026 at 7:05 PM UTC
Bonfire Parable
Newly married at twenty-three to my lovely, lonely first wife, I filled my countless weekends cutting up thick-barked deadfall, hefting logs meant for two into Jake's bonfire where we poured motor oil drained from his Jeep until the brawly flames reared four stories tall and melted bottles. I remember little after that until the clock clipped three and the bonfire stopped whistling from its dwindling amber heart - I had to excuse myself into the soft-shadow trees, missed my footing and fell into a dark, bristling beak of lawn that swallowed me whole & as I lay there voices called me, called me from car dome lights that flickered on like wrong stars, laughing that it was all over now, the party was all over now: just go home, just go home.
EvanS
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Apr 18
Apr 18, 2026 at 7:05 PM UTC
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