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My dove was right: A dove’s blood had to be spilled at the open window. Your stiffened body, a memory treasured for what it was. Cracking of a spine, a last deep breath out of your little lungs, tongue dried up. I was pulling his tongue for weeks now, for you to interrupt, holding onto his trench coat and the smell of lentil soup. "Please like me", I yelled, and his silence yelled back at me. And if it had been up to you, it would have been less of a mess, and I thank you for that, my dove. A life for a life: My dove was right.
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Apr 5
Apr 5, 2026 at 3:33 PM UTC
The Dove Continued
My dove was right: A dove’s blood had to be spilled at the open window. Your stiffened body, a memory treasured for what it was. Cracking of a spine, a last deep breath out of your little lungs, tongue dried up. I was pulling his tongue for weeks now, for you to interrupt, holding onto his trench coat and the smell of lentil soup. "Please like me", I yelled, and his silence yelled back at me. And if it had been up to you, it would have been less of a mess, and I thank you for that, my dove. A life for a life: My dove was right.
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Apr 5
Apr 5, 2026 at 3:33 PM UTC
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