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The open window lets the night in. A fevered body lies on cold bathroom tiles. Something breaks inside the ribs. Images flicker behind the eyelids. Pain: there, without a body here, sweat on the skin. Consciousness wants to be in this body with this nausea, a ringing hum. Mouth catches breath learning the weight of flesh. Reality comes back in waves soothed by fainting cut off from the world before the spirit slips away like a startled bird into something without a frame.
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Apr 3
Apr 3, 2026 at 2:40 PM UTC
Fainting
The open window lets the night in. A fevered body lies on cold bathroom tiles. Something breaks inside the ribs. Images flicker behind the eyelids. Pain: there, without a body here, sweat on the skin. Consciousness wants to be in this body with this nausea, a ringing hum. Mouth catches breath learning the weight of flesh. Reality comes back in waves soothed by fainting cut off from the world before the spirit slips away like a startled bird into something without a frame.
Agnes-de-Lodz
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48/F/Poland
Apr 3
Apr 3, 2026 at 2:40 PM UTC
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