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A story of two brothers who drove a knife into a tree. Silver meant life. Rust meant death. I never had a knife but I did have a friendship bracelet. A beautiful butterfly. On the top, it looked pretty. But no one saw how its pretty silver color was fading to a rusty copper. As the silver shifted to rust, I remembered the story. My friendship was dying. I could see it. And yet... it only turned rusty on exactly half of the butterfly. Maybe I could save this. So I tried to be a better friend. It worked. I can't believe it worked. The rust faded back to silver. There are still some traces of rust but no friendship is perfect. And I am okay with that. Yet now, beneath the silver, I see grey. Dark, unmoving grey. Solid rock. The story doesn't say what to do about grey.
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Mar 28
Mar 28, 2026 at 12:44 AM UTC
A Grimm Warning From My Bracelet
A story of two brothers who drove a knife into a tree. Silver meant life. Rust meant death. I never had a knife but I did have a friendship bracelet. A beautiful butterfly. On the top, it looked pretty. But no one saw how its pretty silver color was fading to a rusty copper. As the silver shifted to rust, I remembered the story. My friendship was dying. I could see it. And yet... it only turned rusty on exactly half of the butterfly. Maybe I could save this. So I tried to be a better friend. It worked. I can't believe it worked. The rust faded back to silver. There are still some traces of rust but no friendship is perfect. And I am okay with that. Yet now, beneath the silver, I see grey. Dark, unmoving grey. Solid rock. The story doesn't say what to do about grey.
this is a true story. I do have a friendship bracelet and it did fade to a copper color on exactly half of the back of the butterfly. also, in case you're wondering, the story is a reference to the story "The Two Brothers" by the Brothers Grimm. just be careful cause there are multiple "Two Brothers" stories if you look it up.
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Mar 28
Mar 28, 2026 at 12:44 AM UTC
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