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The sun looks so beautiful—its orange radiance makes me think of you. It brings to mind your smile, your eyes. The sky looks like a bride, with curious eyes just like yours, as if it hasn’t yet been weighed down by the cruelty of the world. Oh, how beautiful the sky is— how beautiful that orange radiance, softly fading like a whisper of something unspoken. And in that quiet glow, I find a piece of you, that only I know, That beauty, That smile And that goofiness behind those still eyes Is what kept me alive Kept me moving And I shall never forget you my love Till the day my chest stops its rise and fall Upon this earth.
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Mar 26
Mar 26, 2026 at 3:06 AM UTC
A Promise in the Twilight
The sun looks so beautiful—its orange radiance makes me think of you. It brings to mind your smile, your eyes. The sky looks like a bride, with curious eyes just like yours, as if it hasn’t yet been weighed down by the cruelty of the world. Oh, how beautiful the sky is— how beautiful that orange radiance, softly fading like a whisper of something unspoken. And in that quiet glow, I find a piece of you, that only I know, That beauty, That smile And that goofiness behind those still eyes Is what kept me alive Kept me moving And I shall never forget you my love Till the day my chest stops its rise and fall Upon this earth.
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Mar 26
Mar 26, 2026 at 3:06 AM UTC
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