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the silence in my room was suffocating, it smelled like mold and dust as i took the blade out again. it looked better than other days, looking kinder than most things do a happy promise, wearing a halo of relief. it felt comforting, knowing all it takes is letting it meet my skin. i got tired of saying this, but just because my grief isn’t loud doesn’t mean it isn’t there. it sits quietly, heavy on my chest, the gut-wrenching pain, the guilt of not crying out loud, the guilt of not screaming. so i held my breath as i forgot, i suppose, sometimes i even fail to remember what purpose oxygen serves in the human body. my body was never a devoted follower of the One above, but my mind was. was… but now… it makes me a bit sad. but isn’t history always a bit sad? flaws are, after all, virtues turned upside down. i read once we tend to become what we are called. i am afraid i could become nothing more than a haunted memory. funny, how i was never called memorable or haunting. keeping the blade aside, i walked out. the world was too loud today. i stood over the footbridge, watching cars blur into nothing. the wind carried a taste of fresh rain, and for a moment, it made me think how the concrete never looked so soft before soft enough to rest.
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Mar 24
Mar 24, 2026 at 11:41 AM UTC
Concrete; Soft Enough to Rest
the silence in my room was suffocating, it smelled like mold and dust as i took the blade out again. it looked better than other days, looking kinder than most things do a happy promise, wearing a halo of relief. it felt comforting, knowing all it takes is letting it meet my skin. i got tired of saying this, but just because my grief isn’t loud doesn’t mean it isn’t there. it sits quietly, heavy on my chest, the gut-wrenching pain, the guilt of not crying out loud, the guilt of not screaming. so i held my breath as i forgot, i suppose, sometimes i even fail to remember what purpose oxygen serves in the human body. my body was never a devoted follower of the One above, but my mind was. was… but now… it makes me a bit sad. but isn’t history always a bit sad? flaws are, after all, virtues turned upside down. i read once we tend to become what we are called. i am afraid i could become nothing more than a haunted memory. funny, how i was never called memorable or haunting. keeping the blade aside, i walked out. the world was too loud today. i stood over the footbridge, watching cars blur into nothing. the wind carried a taste of fresh rain, and for a moment, it made me think how the concrete never looked so soft before soft enough to rest.
There is a French term called 'L’appel du vide.' This phenomenon is when you are standing in front of a steep cliff and suddenly get an unexplainable desire to jump, or when you are crossing the road and think, “ah, if i jump in front of that rushing car, i would die.” This phrase literally means 'the call of the void.' How fascinating, isn’t it?
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Mar 24
Mar 24, 2026 at 11:41 AM UTC
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