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So I was swimming in the ocean the pacific it was summer, nearly September but that ocean is always frigid I wanted to swim So I went in with all my clothes on and the water so so cold I tried to imitate the body surfers and dive under the waves but I got caught in the tide and pulled under One beat my heart pumps out the sand the salt the cold I try to swim up to breathe I hit the bottom Where am I? For a second that stretched into an hour I thought I was going to die With my mouth full of saltwater And my hair waving like the kelp fronds I didn’t of course I found the sky Never have I been so glad to see the clouds And the sun
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Nov 29, 2013
Nov 29, 2013 at 12:48 AM UTC
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So I was swimming in the ocean the pacific it was summer, nearly September but that ocean is always frigid I wanted to swim So I went in with all my clothes on and the water so so cold I tried to imitate the body surfers and dive under the waves but I got caught in the tide and pulled under One beat my heart pumps out the sand the salt the cold I try to swim up to breathe I hit the bottom Where am I? For a second that stretched into an hour I thought I was going to die With my mouth full of saltwater And my hair waving like the kelp fronds I didn’t of course I found the sky Never have I been so glad to see the clouds And the sun
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Nov 29, 2013
Nov 29, 2013 at 12:48 AM UTC
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