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I finally said my peace, laid my heart on the table like a fragile glass cup waiting to see if you would hold it or watch it fall. For so long my feelings lived in a locked room, quiet, suffocating, burning slowly like a candle that nobody noticed melting. I thought speaking would be freedom. I thought truth would feel like air in my lungs. But your weak response thin as paper, careless as wind dragged me back to the storm I had just escaped. Now the rage is louder than before. Maybe silence would have been kinder to me. Maybe some feelings are meant to stay buried, like letters never sent, like candles that burn alone in empty rooms. And yet somewhere in the smoke of everything I said, I know this much: A heart that speaks may break louder, but at least it refuses to die quietly.
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Mar 11
Mar 11, 2026 at 6:13 PM UTC
After the words.
I finally said my peace, laid my heart on the table like a fragile glass cup waiting to see if you would hold it or watch it fall. For so long my feelings lived in a locked room, quiet, suffocating, burning slowly like a candle that nobody noticed melting. I thought speaking would be freedom. I thought truth would feel like air in my lungs. But your weak response thin as paper, careless as wind dragged me back to the storm I had just escaped. Now the rage is louder than before. Maybe silence would have been kinder to me. Maybe some feelings are meant to stay buried, like letters never sent, like candles that burn alone in empty rooms. And yet somewhere in the smoke of everything I said, I know this much: A heart that speaks may break louder, but at least it refuses to die quietly.
Mel_0308
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F/Zimbabwe
Mar 11
Mar 11, 2026 at 6:13 PM UTC
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