Breathing, bathing, beds, blankets.
Singing to sleep.
Shirts, socks, smooth slippers.
Waking with warm whispers.
Hugs, hands, heartbeat-hearing.
Stress surrendered in the sight of soothing
smiles.
Listening to soft sounds of lyrical loving
laughs.
Curling up and cuddling in calming coils by candlelight.
Sensitive stroking, sweet snuggling.
Reveling, repeating, repeating.
Forever finding:
Comfort in cozy coupled closeness.
Nov 28, 2013
Nov 28, 2013 at 12:20 PM UTC
Breathing, bathing, beds, blankets.
Singing to sleep.
Shirts, socks, smooth slippers.
Waking with warm whispers.
Hugs, hands, heartbeat-hearing.
Stress surrendered in the sight of soothing
smiles.
Listening to soft sounds of lyrical loving
laughs.
Curling up and cuddling in calming coils by candlelight.
Sensitive stroking, sweet snuggling.
Reveling, repeating, repeating.
Forever finding:
Comfort in cozy coupled closeness.
I'm very happy with this poem!! I wrote a ton of alliterate lines then arranged them so it's sort of like a day:
Going to sleep, waking up, day, back home going back to sleep.
Then tried to make a bit more parallel.
Hope anyone who reads it enjoys it.