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i'm 22 now, I still don't understand grief. i've lost people, things, myself even. it's never felt like this before... I know about denial, and anger, bargaining, depression and even acceptance. I've been through it all before, I've lived it and felt better after. but I think there's a secret sixth stage of grief that no one ever tells you about a kind of grief only unlocked when you lose something profound. I don't feel anger like I normally would, or sad like usual after a loss. not this time. There's no denial, no acceptance for this one. I would burn the world to the ground if I could. I would etch your image into every surface I found until the very earth couldn't spin without knowing you were there, that you existed upon it. I would write books in your name, write words so life altering that every person who read my verses would never love again without loving in your image. there's a middle space, between acceptance and denial. a soft inky black space that you used to fill with light, that used to hum with the sound of your purr. a warmth that was extinguished when you did. and id flip myself inside out if it meant I was with you ..wherever it is you went
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Mar 5
Mar 5, 2026 at 4:14 AM UTC
Orbit
i'm 22 now, I still don't understand grief. i've lost people, things, myself even. it's never felt like this before... I know about denial, and anger, bargaining, depression and even acceptance. I've been through it all before, I've lived it and felt better after. but I think there's a secret sixth stage of grief that no one ever tells you about a kind of grief only unlocked when you lose something profound. I don't feel anger like I normally would, or sad like usual after a loss. not this time. There's no denial, no acceptance for this one. I would burn the world to the ground if I could. I would etch your image into every surface I found until the very earth couldn't spin without knowing you were there, that you existed upon it. I would write books in your name, write words so life altering that every person who read my verses would never love again without loving in your image. there's a middle space, between acceptance and denial. a soft inky black space that you used to fill with light, that used to hum with the sound of your purr. a warmth that was extinguished when you did. and id flip myself inside out if it meant I was with you ..wherever it is you went
rest in peace my baby Orbit <3
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22/Non-binary/canada
Mar 5
Mar 5, 2026 at 4:14 AM UTC
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