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He surprises her with a gift on her anniversary A shining red rose in a vase of clear water That is illuminated by the sun’s glow And she goes to kiss him, tears run down her face She can’t express her love enough for this man As they go into their room and close the door The red rose in it’s clear water sits with it’s lustful red color A few weeks go by and surely the water starts to recede the women who wept over this rose Goes to crack a bottle of Rosé and closes her eyes In the sunlight a slight blemish on her face A handprint faded red lingers as she takes a sip But she forgets about the rose so the flower starts to lose hope A month in the water just seemed to have disappeared Even if the vase was full night would have swallowed what was there The only light comes from the tv, a soap opera plays but on mute Only sound is from the broken girl’s cries as her heart is strewn The man that she had loved was gone never to come back Why not paint her black and blue? The pain would have only lasted a day or two But a broken heart was just too much strain So she cries and cries until her cries were no more Just restful, puffy red eyes, asleep forever more The rose fell to the floor Once a lustful red, turned black and was pronounced dead.
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Mar 3
Mar 3, 2026 at 12:13 PM UTC
The Red Rose
He surprises her with a gift on her anniversary A shining red rose in a vase of clear water That is illuminated by the sun’s glow And she goes to kiss him, tears run down her face She can’t express her love enough for this man As they go into their room and close the door The red rose in it’s clear water sits with it’s lustful red color A few weeks go by and surely the water starts to recede the women who wept over this rose Goes to crack a bottle of Rosé and closes her eyes In the sunlight a slight blemish on her face A handprint faded red lingers as she takes a sip But she forgets about the rose so the flower starts to lose hope A month in the water just seemed to have disappeared Even if the vase was full night would have swallowed what was there The only light comes from the tv, a soap opera plays but on mute Only sound is from the broken girl’s cries as her heart is strewn The man that she had loved was gone never to come back Why not paint her black and blue? The pain would have only lasted a day or two But a broken heart was just too much strain So she cries and cries until her cries were no more Just restful, puffy red eyes, asleep forever more The rose fell to the floor Once a lustful red, turned black and was pronounced dead.
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18/M/Lake
Mar 3
Mar 3, 2026 at 12:13 PM UTC
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