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I stood by the ocean once, back against a cold wall, and for a second I couldn’t tell which one I was. The ocean kept throwing itself forward. Loud. Messy. Unashamed. Like it didn’t care how many times it had to break to be heard. The wall just stood there. Quiet. Taking hit after hit like it signed up for it. I used to think I was the ocean. All emotion. All reaction. Crashing into everything that didn’t understand me. But some nights I feel more like the wall. Still on the outside. Hollow on the inside. Smiling like nothing is chipping away. Water is patient. It doesn’t argue. It doesn’t need the last word. It just comes back. That’s what thoughts do. That’s what regret does. They don’t scream. They return. Little by little they carve something out of you until you knock on your own chest and it sounds different. Empty in places. Echoing. The crazy part is the wall never notices the moment it starts becoming hollow. It happens slowly. Quietly. Between impacts. But here’s what the ocean taught me. Hollow doesn’t mean useless. It doesn’t mean weak. Sometimes it just means you survived enough pressure to change shape. The ocean never quits. The wall never runs. And somewhere between crashing and standing you learn how to bend without breaking. I don’t know if I’m the ocean or the wall anymore. Maybe I’m both. Maybe we all are. But I know this. Even hollow things still stand. — Itz_All_True
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Mar 3
Mar 3, 2026 at 9:23 AM UTC
Hollow Against the Ocean
I stood by the ocean once, back against a cold wall, and for a second I couldn’t tell which one I was. The ocean kept throwing itself forward. Loud. Messy. Unashamed. Like it didn’t care how many times it had to break to be heard. The wall just stood there. Quiet. Taking hit after hit like it signed up for it. I used to think I was the ocean. All emotion. All reaction. Crashing into everything that didn’t understand me. But some nights I feel more like the wall. Still on the outside. Hollow on the inside. Smiling like nothing is chipping away. Water is patient. It doesn’t argue. It doesn’t need the last word. It just comes back. That’s what thoughts do. That’s what regret does. They don’t scream. They return. Little by little they carve something out of you until you knock on your own chest and it sounds different. Empty in places. Echoing. The crazy part is the wall never notices the moment it starts becoming hollow. It happens slowly. Quietly. Between impacts. But here’s what the ocean taught me. Hollow doesn’t mean useless. It doesn’t mean weak. Sometimes it just means you survived enough pressure to change shape. The ocean never quits. The wall never runs. And somewhere between crashing and standing you learn how to bend without breaking. I don’t know if I’m the ocean or the wall anymore. Maybe I’m both. Maybe we all are. But I know this. Even hollow things still stand. — Itz_All_True
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Mar 3
Mar 3, 2026 at 9:23 AM UTC
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