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I saw you before the morning took the edges off the world. You were a question, a half-drawn breath in the corners of every room. Your name was a bruise I kept pressing at in the hope it would turn gold. Alchemy of self depravity... I tried to measure you with syllables, with sleepless nights, with the soft arithmetic of wanting. But you were always too much or too little: a truth that flickered in and out of my hands like a flame trying to speak. I counted the minutes as though love could be tallied like ledger lines in a ruined cathedral. But you were never present in the same ledger. You were a footnote, a rumor of light beneath a door I could not open. I gifted you my body, my hunger, my most ungovernable dawns, you touched them like one touches a wound to see if it still bleeds. I asked for a reflection, just a mirror. Not love, not reciprocity just acknowledgment that I was visible to you beyond the margin of polite formality. But you looked past me as though I were a metaphor too inconvenient to make literal. And so I carry you like an open question: a city at war with its own architecture, with streets that lead only to silence. I have loved you with the patience of ruin, with the devotion of one who learns to speak the language of ache. But here is what remains Beyond your face I see with eyes closed Hoping to touch a mirage by setting myself alight Just to prolong feeling 'you', in the weight of my pain. The poem does not return. The name does not come back. Only this: a body still reaching toward something that never held it. And in that reaching I find my own pulse defiant, unclaimed, still loud enough to drown out your quiet.
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Feb 25
Feb 25, 2026 at 9:07 PM UTC
Laughter at a Public Execution
I saw you before the morning took the edges off the world. You were a question, a half-drawn breath in the corners of every room. Your name was a bruise I kept pressing at in the hope it would turn gold. Alchemy of self depravity... I tried to measure you with syllables, with sleepless nights, with the soft arithmetic of wanting. But you were always too much or too little: a truth that flickered in and out of my hands like a flame trying to speak. I counted the minutes as though love could be tallied like ledger lines in a ruined cathedral. But you were never present in the same ledger. You were a footnote, a rumor of light beneath a door I could not open. I gifted you my body, my hunger, my most ungovernable dawns, you touched them like one touches a wound to see if it still bleeds. I asked for a reflection, just a mirror. Not love, not reciprocity just acknowledgment that I was visible to you beyond the margin of polite formality. But you looked past me as though I were a metaphor too inconvenient to make literal. And so I carry you like an open question: a city at war with its own architecture, with streets that lead only to silence. I have loved you with the patience of ruin, with the devotion of one who learns to speak the language of ache. But here is what remains Beyond your face I see with eyes closed Hoping to touch a mirage by setting myself alight Just to prolong feeling 'you', in the weight of my pain. The poem does not return. The name does not come back. Only this: a body still reaching toward something that never held it. And in that reaching I find my own pulse defiant, unclaimed, still loud enough to drown out your quiet.
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Feb 25
Feb 25, 2026 at 9:07 PM UTC
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