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Put your hands up, try and keep a straight face, but it will never break our fall. Isn't there a town over there? Why are children climbing up walls? You said, eventually we'll lose them all. You're a reflection of me, bright, weary and impossibly lost, sewing sour sentiments into a doleful flag. You said, the sad was only a reciprocity of rain, but it didn't break our fall, didn't save our town. The sign says: 'stay away from here', a sheltered kiss then to remember us by, while nearby, someone drowns in the clear blue water. Sometimes the cruelest part of tragedy is its proximity to hope.
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Feb 10
Feb 10, 2026 at 6:09 PM UTC
The Soviet Arrives
Put your hands up, try and keep a straight face, but it will never break our fall. Isn't there a town over there? Why are children climbing up walls? You said, eventually we'll lose them all. You're a reflection of me, bright, weary and impossibly lost, sewing sour sentiments into a doleful flag. You said, the sad was only a reciprocity of rain, but it didn't break our fall, didn't save our town. The sign says: 'stay away from here', a sheltered kiss then to remember us by, while nearby, someone drowns in the clear blue water. Sometimes the cruelest part of tragedy is its proximity to hope.
Carlo-C-Gomez
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56/M/The Exclusion Zone
Feb 10
Feb 10, 2026 at 6:09 PM UTC
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