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This old house has grown mellow, Adapts itself to the winter weather By the virtue of little resistance: Letting in some persistent wind, Giving up, with unconvincing reluctance, Some inside heat and light. Outside the snowflakes dally now – A carefree afternoon's work (or was it play?) And into the evening – Enough is enough, Five inches on the ground already Where the wind hasn't played Give and take, and made Of the backyard a lake With waves held still at one below; There's always tomorrow To adjust today's work if there's Been a mistake of what And how much should go where. The wine I sip by the fireplace I toast to you Sunlight In a frozen glass bubble. And the delicate white crunch I hear on the outside steps I'll investigate tomorrow. Unless I hear what I heard before ... The three short raps Of the wind playing again With the shutter.
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Feb 5
Feb 5, 2026 at 1:53 PM UTC
Cold Night
This old house has grown mellow, Adapts itself to the winter weather By the virtue of little resistance: Letting in some persistent wind, Giving up, with unconvincing reluctance, Some inside heat and light. Outside the snowflakes dally now – A carefree afternoon's work (or was it play?) And into the evening – Enough is enough, Five inches on the ground already Where the wind hasn't played Give and take, and made Of the backyard a lake With waves held still at one below; There's always tomorrow To adjust today's work if there's Been a mistake of what And how much should go where. The wine I sip by the fireplace I toast to you Sunlight In a frozen glass bubble. And the delicate white crunch I hear on the outside steps I'll investigate tomorrow. Unless I hear what I heard before ... The three short raps Of the wind playing again With the shutter.
Poem by Donald Russell Freeman (1947 - 2012). Born in Reading PA, he lived for many years in the Old Louisville Historic Residential District in Louisville, KY and later in Key West FL for the final decades of his life.
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Feb 5
Feb 5, 2026 at 1:53 PM UTC
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