Hello Poetry
Submit your work and get some sparkles! Create free account
I felt a gentle breeze of you in a soft rest of a place Repurposed all noise has settled in a perfect space In a family of words where all pain striving stops, Just the very thought of you, every pressure flops, A cabin in the Mountains, Manoah, an empty bed, All things are possible, you fit inside a chair is red Nothing is demanded, ah, the simple life is sweet, All the grains barley sway a gentle stack of wheat, A face of calm she rests in us I can see you breathe All my memories have arrived in a whisper weave
0
Feb 4
Feb 4, 2026 at 9:12 AM UTC
A Gentle Breeze of You
I felt a gentle breeze of you in a soft rest of a place Repurposed all noise has settled in a perfect space In a family of words where all pain striving stops, Just the very thought of you, every pressure flops, A cabin in the Mountains, Manoah, an empty bed, All things are possible, you fit inside a chair is red Nothing is demanded, ah, the simple life is sweet, All the grains barley sway a gentle stack of wheat, A face of calm she rests in us I can see you breathe All my memories have arrived in a whisper weave
There are mornings when the (ment) in us seems to blow a cold breeze through a mountain window like a good kind of teasing that relaxes us with ease and plays a gentle melody in our minds that reminds us we are not alone in the empty of our spaces.
DarrellBaughn
Written by
62/M/Jackson, Mississippi
Feb 4
Feb 4, 2026 at 9:12 AM UTC
Request permission to use this poem