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Fine is fantastic; I’m glad you’re feeling alright. Unless you feel sick; Unless you burn bright With a pain akin to mine, Hidden; out of sight. Walking a thin line Of a lonely, out of touch, Less fantastic fine. If it is as such, In that sad case, I’m sorry. It might not mean much, But where we are, we Both are in similar boats; Under a starry, But dark sky that coats Good, loving hearts with sorrow. Yet still your heart floats, On joy you borrow From the good times that you know Will come tomorrow.
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Feb 2
Feb 2, 2026 at 11:10 PM UTC
Fine is Fantastic
Fine is fantastic; I’m glad you’re feeling alright. Unless you feel sick; Unless you burn bright With a pain akin to mine, Hidden; out of sight. Walking a thin line Of a lonely, out of touch, Less fantastic fine. If it is as such, In that sad case, I’m sorry. It might not mean much, But where we are, we Both are in similar boats; Under a starry, But dark sky that coats Good, loving hearts with sorrow. Yet still your heart floats, On joy you borrow From the good times that you know Will come tomorrow.
Inspired by the words of a friend.
Wolfnation4800
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17/M/Colorado
Feb 2
Feb 2, 2026 at 11:10 PM UTC
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