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Jeannine, Jeannine ! My lady fair! I stroke your neck and touch your hair. But..... Is there un settled issues there? Can I inform my fledging mind, "Accept your love as a different kind!" You've said you loved, it felt heartfelt! But..... You love your car and broiled smelt. What a cadre of loves to be in, Tantamount to lofty being! ( dangling by a hook you say? Emotive capture gone astray.....).
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Jan 19
Jan 19, 2026 at 1:55 PM UTC
Hooked?
Jeannine, Jeannine ! My lady fair! I stroke your neck and touch your hair. But..... Is there un settled issues there? Can I inform my fledging mind, "Accept your love as a different kind!" You've said you loved, it felt heartfelt! But..... You love your car and broiled smelt. What a cadre of loves to be in, Tantamount to lofty being! ( dangling by a hook you say? Emotive capture gone astray.....).
Satire?
lewis-eliou
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74/M/Crown Point, IN
Jan 19
Jan 19, 2026 at 1:55 PM UTC
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