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She loads the film like she loads the gun slow and trembling Her head is still ringing but she remembers the words and numbers and his face so vivid so life like even in the smoke-filled silence This will be a document in waiting collecting like a pond streaming from the center draining out when the colours move apart The job is done her heart unmoved perhaps she'll send this to the folks back home as a postcard in place of the moving picture forever in her head
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Jan 14
Jan 14, 2026 at 7:41 PM UTC
When the Colours Move Apart
She loads the film like she loads the gun slow and trembling Her head is still ringing but she remembers the words and numbers and his face so vivid so life like even in the smoke-filled silence This will be a document in waiting collecting like a pond streaming from the center draining out when the colours move apart The job is done her heart unmoved perhaps she'll send this to the folks back home as a postcard in place of the moving picture forever in her head
Carlo-C-Gomez
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56/M/The Exclusion Zone
Jan 14
Jan 14, 2026 at 7:41 PM UTC
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