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Don't be fooled by the place it is sent to be This is no poem no somg nothing to dance to This is a hope that someone may read and reply Their thoughts on this thought of mine Perhaps I should tell a story through sonnet Of a man of youth battling love and lust Of sorrow and joy A man who is flippant, almost overly so But is serious about matters of the heart A journey nonetheless Where he travels many worlds yet goes nowhere A story of me and how my life has been With a touch of hyperbolic flamboyance Would you sit down and read and maybe enjoy Said work assuming it has been well developed Amd lacks the typos this probably has?
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Nov 25, 2013
Nov 25, 2013 at 12:36 AM UTC
Priscilla, My Dear (idea proposal)
Don't be fooled by the place it is sent to be This is no poem no somg nothing to dance to This is a hope that someone may read and reply Their thoughts on this thought of mine Perhaps I should tell a story through sonnet Of a man of youth battling love and lust Of sorrow and joy A man who is flippant, almost overly so But is serious about matters of the heart A journey nonetheless Where he travels many worlds yet goes nowhere A story of me and how my life has been With a touch of hyperbolic flamboyance Would you sit down and read and maybe enjoy Said work assuming it has been well developed Amd lacks the typos this probably has?
I am proposin an idea that has been rattling in my head for a while. Almost like an Epic but instead have it be a sonnet series. About me but expressed as a fictional view of another person's life. Would you like to see it develop?
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Nov 25, 2013
Nov 25, 2013 at 12:36 AM UTC
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