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never mind lords-a-leaping ladies dancing, drummers drumming and far too much assorted bird-life nor even those five gold rings never mind that night sleeping out beneath the stars well maybe not so much sleeping as discovering passion, love even today it all comes to this a business deal at the city gate redeeming the family inheritance land for sale and with it me or the land the sweetener for taking on the widow to keep the name alive a responsibility many avoid trading begins, Boaz and a relative to one I'm a liability, to be shunned for the other a prize to be won they haggle, it's my life yet and now the deal is done as witnessed by the elders paid for, should I be offended or rejoice, my future secured doing what needs to be done what survival here, now requires a man's imagination and heart capture, possibilities create
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Jan 7
Jan 7, 2026 at 3:02 PM UTC
The Deal
never mind lords-a-leaping ladies dancing, drummers drumming and far too much assorted bird-life nor even those five gold rings never mind that night sleeping out beneath the stars well maybe not so much sleeping as discovering passion, love even today it all comes to this a business deal at the city gate redeeming the family inheritance land for sale and with it me or the land the sweetener for taking on the widow to keep the name alive a responsibility many avoid trading begins, Boaz and a relative to one I'm a liability, to be shunned for the other a prize to be won they haggle, it's my life yet and now the deal is done as witnessed by the elders paid for, should I be offended or rejoice, my future secured doing what needs to be done what survival here, now requires a man's imagination and heart capture, possibilities create
5th January 2026 Twelfth Day of Christmas cf. Ruth 4 Stephen Cooper
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Jan 7, 2026 at 3:02 PM UTC
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