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Beauty found in matchless form When dancers train their grace Can lack the ****** of inner storm That moves men from their place Instead it invites cool applause From those who know us not For never will it give them pause To take in what we’ve taught But those who waltz authentic stride, Though lacking perfect frame, Will aid their fellow men inside To dance there none the same While perfect steps may leave one awed, They seldom birth a shift But fear’s unspoken promenade Will yield a matchless gift.
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Jan 1
Jan 1, 2026 at 1:32 PM UTC
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Beauty found in matchless form When dancers train their grace Can lack the ****** of inner storm That moves men from their place Instead it invites cool applause From those who know us not For never will it give them pause To take in what we’ve taught But those who waltz authentic stride, Though lacking perfect frame, Will aid their fellow men inside To dance there none the same While perfect steps may leave one awed, They seldom birth a shift But fear’s unspoken promenade Will yield a matchless gift.
This poem is about letting go of perfectionism. A perfect person may look put-together, but may have no passion in what he or she does, a passion that tends to motivate change (stanza one). The benefit we get from perfectionism is only fleeting recognition ("cool applause") from people who aren't truly interested in us as people (stanza two). On the other hand, those who live by their convictions, apart from the act of people-pleasing, will teach others to do the same (stanza three). In the end, perfectionism does not change us, but responding bravely to our fear of rejection--by living by truth instead of by others' opinions--does (stanza four).
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Jan 1
Jan 1, 2026 at 1:32 PM UTC
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