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Do not enquire. (sonnet #MMMMMMMMMCMV) Deep, rosy blushes haunt bare trees' detail, Whose blackened silhouettes wait, silent, dense With import 'fore the ****** notes' suspense, As if the pure romance hangs poised t'avail; And dawn sifts through thereafter on the trail To early madness, where I lose all thence Before the shock of ruin, as if defense Left with the night, nor owns aught sense of bail. Yet, LORD, Thy mercies, new each morning, stir Afresh on ev'ry side, and sweetly do Surround me, til, where would I be as twere Sans Thee? According to the Scriptures too, I'm nothing sans Thee, LORD. Let me in tour Wait just on Thee, rest there, and follow You. 23Dec25a
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Dec 30, 2025
Dec 30, 2025 at 9:54 AM UTC
A Meteoric Fall, Is That, M'Dear?
Do not enquire. (sonnet #MMMMMMMMMCMV) Deep, rosy blushes haunt bare trees' detail, Whose blackened silhouettes wait, silent, dense With import 'fore the ****** notes' suspense, As if the pure romance hangs poised t'avail; And dawn sifts through thereafter on the trail To early madness, where I lose all thence Before the shock of ruin, as if defense Left with the night, nor owns aught sense of bail. Yet, LORD, Thy mercies, new each morning, stir Afresh on ev'ry side, and sweetly do Surround me, til, where would I be as twere Sans Thee? According to the Scriptures too, I'm nothing sans Thee, LORD. Let me in tour Wait just on Thee, rest there, and follow You. 23Dec25a
Honestly, I nearly swooned while driving home as I mulled the lines, but failed utterly at conveying the original thought's depths, sadly. Ah, me.
JennyGordon
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51/F/Bolingbrook, IL
Dec 30, 2025
Dec 30, 2025 at 9:54 AM UTC
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