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Wide eyed girls – A category? Awe, it’s when they squint their lids, quite different, I guess? Normally they would curve their eyeballs large, squish neck and pull head, with an open mouth and raised eyebrows. And the problem is when they wear sunglasses— it’s like Mona Lisa cutting her own lids off just to lose eyebrows later. And what about the men with downward smile? Normally you would smile upward, a perfect skateboard leeward. They give a juvenile scent suffering from old-age, inherently jaw fall, muscly secant, quite hard to say when it’s sarcastic. And their problem? They laugh, while smiling— they just feel like Laughing Buddha, but ones from Shaolin. Sheesh— wide eyed girls and their downward smile men.
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Dec 7, 2025
Dec 7, 2025 at 12:46 PM UTC
The lid , The bow , The arc
Wide eyed girls – A category? Awe, it’s when they squint their lids, quite different, I guess? Normally they would curve their eyeballs large, squish neck and pull head, with an open mouth and raised eyebrows. And the problem is when they wear sunglasses— it’s like Mona Lisa cutting her own lids off just to lose eyebrows later. And what about the men with downward smile? Normally you would smile upward, a perfect skateboard leeward. They give a juvenile scent suffering from old-age, inherently jaw fall, muscly secant, quite hard to say when it’s sarcastic. And their problem? They laugh, while smiling— they just feel like Laughing Buddha, but ones from Shaolin. Sheesh— wide eyed girls and their downward smile men.
This isn’t a taxonomy of faces, but a tease of how quickly people turn tiny expressions into grand identities. The wide eyes, the bent smile—nothing mystical, nothing coded—just features, yet worn like titles. The poem stretches them on purpose, to show how absurd it is to believe the world studies every eyelid twitch and cheek arc. A face should be a face, steady and unaltered, not a public performance adjusted for imagined watchers.
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Dec 7, 2025
Dec 7, 2025 at 12:46 PM UTC
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