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And when I walked into the room of death To greet you, breathless, struggling with the air, Your stare was fixed, unchanged, as was your breath, Your pain and thoughts opposed beyond a worldly care. I thought of love and grace for you, a need, A distant hope that God alone could grant; A song to hear, a hopeful prayer to read, That heaven, nearby, might give your foot, to plant, A place, a fair and warm dominion sure That Christ, all good, to you in peace might give A trade of regret and sorrow for something pure, A chance for life eternally to live At last your breath, that you forgot to take, Would give you peace and life so fair to make.
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Nov 25, 2025
Nov 25, 2025 at 1:35 PM UTC
Sonnet I (11/6/25)
And when I walked into the room of death To greet you, breathless, struggling with the air, Your stare was fixed, unchanged, as was your breath, Your pain and thoughts opposed beyond a worldly care. I thought of love and grace for you, a need, A distant hope that God alone could grant; A song to hear, a hopeful prayer to read, That heaven, nearby, might give your foot, to plant, A place, a fair and warm dominion sure That Christ, all good, to you in peace might give A trade of regret and sorrow for something pure, A chance for life eternally to live At last your breath, that you forgot to take, Would give you peace and life so fair to make.
On my father's passing.
duane-kline
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Nov 25, 2025
Nov 25, 2025 at 1:35 PM UTC
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