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I keep trying to stay afloat, but the waves crash harder. My voice muffles the more I scream a distant rumble now. My eyes sting so I keep them shut; the blue water turns to black anyway. The waves rise faster, sinking me under. I fight, but the struggle only sinks me further. I’ve given up. Hands flail, then fall. No hand reaches for me. Maybe I mistook life for the shore, but it was the waves all along, pulling me under. Why struggle when the result waits, silent, for me to surrender?
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Nov 25, 2025
Nov 25, 2025 at 3:17 AM UTC
Beneath the Surface
I keep trying to stay afloat, but the waves crash harder. My voice muffles the more I scream a distant rumble now. My eyes sting so I keep them shut; the blue water turns to black anyway. The waves rise faster, sinking me under. I fight, but the struggle only sinks me further. I’ve given up. Hands flail, then fall. No hand reaches for me. Maybe I mistook life for the shore, but it was the waves all along, pulling me under. Why struggle when the result waits, silent, for me to surrender?
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Nov 25, 2025
Nov 25, 2025 at 3:17 AM UTC
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