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Met on a hillside, to my surprise, a rival appeared at my left side. His stride long, glory of ’74, two dueling foes, forged by the same sword. The vigor of youth races with the sun. I tried to rob my match of his fun, but the path veered to his advantage, the final kick—more than I could manage. His lengthening stride low in the sun, shadow’s running ahead—the race’s won; our brief reunion sank into dusk, till he pops up again—rising from the dust.                                —•0•—
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Nov 20, 2025
Nov 20, 2025 at 1:08 AM UTC
Just Before Dusk
Met on a hillside, to my surprise, a rival appeared at my left side. His stride long, glory of ’74, two dueling foes, forged by the same sword. The vigor of youth races with the sun. I tried to rob my match of his fun, but the path veered to his advantage, the final kick—more than I could manage. His lengthening stride low in the sun, shadow’s running ahead—the race’s won; our brief reunion sank into dusk, till he pops up again—rising from the dust.                                —•0•—
As a member of the Vallejo Running Club, I enjoyed my last hurrah as a runner with good form.
david-anthony-carrillo
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Nov 20, 2025
Nov 20, 2025 at 1:08 AM UTC
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