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“As the deer pants for water, so my soul thirsts for You.” But my thirst was misdirected, and it tattered my habit. I sullied my priestly garments, with choices I thought harmless All in the name of goodness and oh goodness, how did I become this? Instead of trotting like a deer I skulk like a wolf I bay instead of bleat Instead of leaves I’m craving meat And I called the meat brother once before I led him to the slaughter I took and made a ***** of your holy, blameless daughter I got so caught up wishing I was good I ended up forgetting what it felt like to know I would always be Yours. My name is “Remembered” But I got obsessed with trying to be “Faithful” And all my efforts turned me Into a beast instead of royalty. Oh Father mend my habit, stitch up my robe And carry me to pastures green That I used to call my home
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Nov 15, 2025
Nov 15, 2025 at 6:16 PM UTC
Zachary
“As the deer pants for water, so my soul thirsts for You.” But my thirst was misdirected, and it tattered my habit. I sullied my priestly garments, with choices I thought harmless All in the name of goodness and oh goodness, how did I become this? Instead of trotting like a deer I skulk like a wolf I bay instead of bleat Instead of leaves I’m craving meat And I called the meat brother once before I led him to the slaughter I took and made a ***** of your holy, blameless daughter I got so caught up wishing I was good I ended up forgetting what it felt like to know I would always be Yours. My name is “Remembered” But I got obsessed with trying to be “Faithful” And all my efforts turned me Into a beast instead of royalty. Oh Father mend my habit, stitch up my robe And carry me to pastures green That I used to call my home
A deer’s lament about how his best attempt at holiness made a monster out of him.
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Nov 15, 2025
Nov 15, 2025 at 6:16 PM UTC
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