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In ten of the raindrops, Some weren’t even rain at all. The storm falls loud and heavy, Yet something quieter feels heavier still. Everything faces backwards, And without a doubt, they walk away — Leaving nothing behind But a mark that will never fade. So little, yet already lost, With no figure to show the wrong or the right. Cold and lonely — carved into my bones. Then came a warm breeze, A whisper guiding me To the sanctuary where I belong. The warm breeze calls to me again. The only difference this time — I don’t follow. Not because I can’t, But because I won’t. I know I’ll be stagnant if I do. Yet I’ve found a scent — So beautiful, So broken. I followed the scent, And I found a creature — So pretty, Yet so… pity. The creature reminds me of my old self — Helpless, Lost, Until I found a breeze — A warm breeze that guided me. Maybe it’s time I become The warm breeze Myself.
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Nov 12, 2025
Nov 12, 2025 at 12:19 AM UTC
The warm breeze
In ten of the raindrops, Some weren’t even rain at all. The storm falls loud and heavy, Yet something quieter feels heavier still. Everything faces backwards, And without a doubt, they walk away — Leaving nothing behind But a mark that will never fade. So little, yet already lost, With no figure to show the wrong or the right. Cold and lonely — carved into my bones. Then came a warm breeze, A whisper guiding me To the sanctuary where I belong. The warm breeze calls to me again. The only difference this time — I don’t follow. Not because I can’t, But because I won’t. I know I’ll be stagnant if I do. Yet I’ve found a scent — So beautiful, So broken. I followed the scent, And I found a creature — So pretty, Yet so… pity. The creature reminds me of my old self — Helpless, Lost, Until I found a breeze — A warm breeze that guided me. Maybe it’s time I become The warm breeze Myself.
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Dammie
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18/M/Underworld
Nov 12, 2025
Nov 12, 2025 at 12:19 AM UTC
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