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ELEMENTS OF GRIEF.πŸ”₯πŸŒŠπŸŒ±πŸŒ€ I saw a light in the dark And moved close to the fire for warmth But the flames left a painful mark. Sending me back to hurt I got invited by the ocean So I moved close to the shores. Finally I felt a peaceful sensation. But like the waves, came my troubles with force. I planted my hopes into the earth. And buried the grief and pain I felt. They both grew ,the first feeble ,and the latter a threat. I cried, for my hope was suppressed to death. The wind dispersed the seeds of my pain And left me wallowing in sorrow. Now I have nothing left to gain. Still with faith I await my tomorrow.
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Nov 11, 2025
Nov 11, 2025 at 4:12 AM UTC
ELEMENTS OF GRIEF.
ELEMENTS OF GRIEF.πŸ”₯πŸŒŠπŸŒ±πŸŒ€ I saw a light in the dark And moved close to the fire for warmth But the flames left a painful mark. Sending me back to hurt I got invited by the ocean So I moved close to the shores. Finally I felt a peaceful sensation. But like the waves, came my troubles with force. I planted my hopes into the earth. And buried the grief and pain I felt. They both grew ,the first feeble ,and the latter a threat. I cried, for my hope was suppressed to death. The wind dispersed the seeds of my pain And left me wallowing in sorrow. Now I have nothing left to gain. Still with faith I await my tomorrow.
Inspiration drawn from the depths of the pain I felt . Yours beloved ...King Ebukadnezzar βœπŸ»πŸ’Œ
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Nov 11, 2025
Nov 11, 2025 at 4:12 AM UTC
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