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How deceitful, profoundly so— Such falsehood’s quiet, ghostly glow. I saw your grief, your solid gloom, A beast that howls through shattered room. So humbly I begged to bear your pain, To ease its weight, with no refrain. Such falsehood—gentle the touch, Yet beneath it foul as much. I would have spoken—but you knew, What so-called love when it’s untrue. Take my soul please, take it, please, Draw it from dull soundless seas; And in your moor, so bleak and wide, leave but one place, that I may bide.
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Nov 7, 2025
Nov 7, 2025 at 4:18 AM UTC
TAKE ME, PLEASE
How deceitful, profoundly so— Such falsehood’s quiet, ghostly glow. I saw your grief, your solid gloom, A beast that howls through shattered room. So humbly I begged to bear your pain, To ease its weight, with no refrain. Such falsehood—gentle the touch, Yet beneath it foul as much. I would have spoken—but you knew, What so-called love when it’s untrue. Take my soul please, take it, please, Draw it from dull soundless seas; And in your moor, so bleak and wide, leave but one place, that I may bide.
Adrian
SpringLikeaBlade
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28/Two-Spirit/Rift
Nov 7, 2025
Nov 7, 2025 at 4:18 AM UTC
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