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There is a fundamental flaw With the way humans plan for future I'm not including all humans of course For always a small percentage More precisely, the exceptional ones Find the way to transcend the limits Such individuals can be clairvoyant Even though not proven scientifically Or self-made individuals tackling destiny Or prodigies, geniuses and wizards With the magic of their own No, I'm talking about the garden-variety I myself am a unit in the run-of-mill crew However, I'm not including myself Because I never think of the future I care about what goes on in the moment Regardless of what tomorrow may bring. The fundamental flaw Lies in the definiteness of planning Whether it be educational, occupational Financial or matrimonial attainments Most people keep on making plans Left and right without a tinge of doubt In their minds and become disappointed Or even shocked when things don't go According to their expectations I have witnessed first-hand How few of my friends, acquaintances And some members of my family Fell victims to rigidity of their intentions To the commanding confidence With which they made future plans. Doubt should be a part of One's daily diet of thinking I have heard that love is blind That justice is blind Well, unrefined confidence Is blinder than both. Nothing ought to be taken for granted In the here and now let alone A time we have no conception of Except that we shall see it If we are lucky enough.
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Nov 6, 2025
Nov 6, 2025 at 2:27 AM UTC
There Is a Flaw
There is a fundamental flaw With the way humans plan for future I'm not including all humans of course For always a small percentage More precisely, the exceptional ones Find the way to transcend the limits Such individuals can be clairvoyant Even though not proven scientifically Or self-made individuals tackling destiny Or prodigies, geniuses and wizards With the magic of their own No, I'm talking about the garden-variety I myself am a unit in the run-of-mill crew However, I'm not including myself Because I never think of the future I care about what goes on in the moment Regardless of what tomorrow may bring. The fundamental flaw Lies in the definiteness of planning Whether it be educational, occupational Financial or matrimonial attainments Most people keep on making plans Left and right without a tinge of doubt In their minds and become disappointed Or even shocked when things don't go According to their expectations I have witnessed first-hand How few of my friends, acquaintances And some members of my family Fell victims to rigidity of their intentions To the commanding confidence With which they made future plans. Doubt should be a part of One's daily diet of thinking I have heard that love is blind That justice is blind Well, unrefined confidence Is blinder than both. Nothing ought to be taken for granted In the here and now let alone A time we have no conception of Except that we shall see it If we are lucky enough.
bijan-rabiee
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71/M/Iran
Nov 6, 2025
Nov 6, 2025 at 2:27 AM UTC
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