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There was a vacant lot in space, And I was interested in that. It was a little spendy, But the view was incredible, So I bought it out from under a man I didn't know. I felt just a little bit bad. I moved right up, Set my belongings on the lawn. I'd heard it would be cold, that empty lot in space, But it wasn't so bad, And the view was incredible. I unpacked and organized my things on that lawn, Made all of grass. There was no house up there. They asked me why I'd moved there, To a houseless lot in space, And I'd tell them two truths: "I wanted to be a little more alone," I'd say, "And I wanted to see everyone at once." They countered with downsides, With hunger, thirst, and love, And they were right, But the view was incredible, And I couldn't leave that behind. I was a little more alone, And a little more cold and thin. I was a little more tired, And my empty lot in space was a square among circles, Just like me. But I looked down at my old house, That shape where I used to live, And I saw everyone at once, Lit up by stars. The view was incredible.
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Nov 20, 2013
Nov 20, 2013 at 1:16 AM UTC
Like beautiful little ants
There was a vacant lot in space, And I was interested in that. It was a little spendy, But the view was incredible, So I bought it out from under a man I didn't know. I felt just a little bit bad. I moved right up, Set my belongings on the lawn. I'd heard it would be cold, that empty lot in space, But it wasn't so bad, And the view was incredible. I unpacked and organized my things on that lawn, Made all of grass. There was no house up there. They asked me why I'd moved there, To a houseless lot in space, And I'd tell them two truths: "I wanted to be a little more alone," I'd say, "And I wanted to see everyone at once." They countered with downsides, With hunger, thirst, and love, And they were right, But the view was incredible, And I couldn't leave that behind. I was a little more alone, And a little more cold and thin. I was a little more tired, And my empty lot in space was a square among circles, Just like me. But I looked down at my old house, That shape where I used to live, And I saw everyone at once, Lit up by stars. The view was incredible.
cari-jane-leemaster
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Nov 20, 2013
Nov 20, 2013 at 1:16 AM UTC
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