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Every moment age is creeping up stealthily but life, life is melting down like a candle that is flickering around. It incinerates, yet tries to smile and keeps broiling, pretending to be alive it flickers around restlessly like a blaze of lightning flame life is withering away, like a candle that is melting down. Life freezes and stiffens, if abandoned it melts and spills, if kept burning instead, every moment death is shaping up slowly and quietly. but life, life is melting down like a candle flickering against the night. --------------- © Suman Pokhrel
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Nov 2, 2025
Nov 2, 2025 at 9:31 AM UTC
A BIRTHDAY GREETING TO MYSELF
Every moment age is creeping up stealthily but life, life is melting down like a candle that is flickering around. It incinerates, yet tries to smile and keeps broiling, pretending to be alive it flickers around restlessly like a blaze of lightning flame life is withering away, like a candle that is melting down. Life freezes and stiffens, if abandoned it melts and spills, if kept burning instead, every moment death is shaping up slowly and quietly. but life, life is melting down like a candle flickering against the night. --------------- © Suman Pokhrel
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M/Biratnagar, Nepal
Nov 2, 2025
Nov 2, 2025 at 9:31 AM UTC
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