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The morning speaks in folded napkins, its breath a rumor of tea and trains. Somewhere, the sky forgets itself— a blue too casual for confession. We speak, you and I, in broken time— half-sentences, half-remembered hymns. Between our words, the silence blooms like lilacs left in an unwashed vase. —“Tell me,” you say, “where does the dream go when the clock wakes?” And I, child of grammar and dust, stammer out the old faith: “Back into the heart, where it was first spoken.” O little world! O colloquial ache! Each day, a letter unposted, each breath, a window unlatched. I love you not with certainty, but with commas— those small hesitations that keep the soul polite. And so, beneath our ordinary talk, a rebellion murmurs softly— the spirit’s wild insistence that wonder is still possible in plain speech. :: 10.26.2025 ::
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Oct 31, 2025
Oct 31, 2025 at 5:01 PM UTC
THE COLLOQUIAL
The morning speaks in folded napkins, its breath a rumor of tea and trains. Somewhere, the sky forgets itself— a blue too casual for confession. We speak, you and I, in broken time— half-sentences, half-remembered hymns. Between our words, the silence blooms like lilacs left in an unwashed vase. —“Tell me,” you say, “where does the dream go when the clock wakes?” And I, child of grammar and dust, stammer out the old faith: “Back into the heart, where it was first spoken.” O little world! O colloquial ache! Each day, a letter unposted, each breath, a window unlatched. I love you not with certainty, but with commas— those small hesitations that keep the soul polite. And so, beneath our ordinary talk, a rebellion murmurs softly— the spirit’s wild insistence that wonder is still possible in plain speech. :: 10.26.2025 ::
A work of meditative lyricism—where the sacred hides in syntax, and emotion resides in pause rather than proclamation. Its traditional sensibility honors restraint, rhythm, and the dignity of everyday faith. It is a hymn whispered across a breakfast table, a testament that the world, though weary, still speaks in miracles—if one listens in commas and silence.
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Oct 31, 2025
Oct 31, 2025 at 5:01 PM UTC
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