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fumbled with tittering fears                  i woke early opened  in the red light room my child’s room    red by his voice lit like emergency in a nuclear submarine and submerged by an allegiance of dreams open the curtain and   it's tarnished cold               first cold autumn play of light bites back that  otherly  world                                                             pray  mother take over begin my day                                 and i'll drop   my unnecessary churn
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Jan 4
Jan 4, 2026 at 8:40 PM UTC
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fumbled with tittering fears                  i woke early opened  in the red light room my child’s room    red by his voice lit like emergency in a nuclear submarine and submerged by an allegiance of dreams open the curtain and   it's tarnished cold               first cold autumn play of light bites back that  otherly  world                                                             pray  mother take over begin my day                                 and i'll drop   my unnecessary churn
date of original notes and versions : 26/10/25 floundered and bungled the routine i am unnecessary churn
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Jan 4, 2026 at 8:40 PM UTC
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