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How hard it is to bare A fragment of the soul, And easy to show the body, Believing someone might glimpse A doubting hope. They speak of nakedness While hiding every single piece Of the naked soul That holds secret knowledge, Burning or embracing, Depending on its purpose. How many times have you said: “Here I hurt. Here I am, real. Be careful I might fall apart If you move my heart Too strongly.” And how often have you searched for more veils To hide the fissures, So nobody would come To scratch old, unhealed wounds? Yes, we are full of unspoken things, Longing to be recognized Without fear That being seen Could mark the beginning Of our destruction. We open the windows for a while, Then close them completely, Not hearing the thunder, Or the sweet music. Only these naked bodies, Laughing before hungry eyes, While the souls inside Weep Ready to be open.
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Oct 12, 2025
Oct 12, 2025 at 10:59 AM UTC
Nakedness
How hard it is to bare A fragment of the soul, And easy to show the body, Believing someone might glimpse A doubting hope. They speak of nakedness While hiding every single piece Of the naked soul That holds secret knowledge, Burning or embracing, Depending on its purpose. How many times have you said: “Here I hurt. Here I am, real. Be careful I might fall apart If you move my heart Too strongly.” And how often have you searched for more veils To hide the fissures, So nobody would come To scratch old, unhealed wounds? Yes, we are full of unspoken things, Longing to be recognized Without fear That being seen Could mark the beginning Of our destruction. We open the windows for a while, Then close them completely, Not hearing the thunder, Or the sweet music. Only these naked bodies, Laughing before hungry eyes, While the souls inside Weep Ready to be open.
This is my response to Badwords's comment under my poem https://hellopoetry.com/poem/4939328/the-sheet-of-paper/
Agnes-de-Lodz
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48/F/Poland
Oct 12, 2025
Oct 12, 2025 at 10:59 AM UTC
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