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Walking into the Reception Hall, they stole the show away, A regal pair they were, with a little bit of Butch and Sundance swagger shown. A confident air, not at all underserved. Dressed with just enough elegance. Their posture and hue , sleek and silky golden, like a duet of Cheetahs. Eyes alert and searching for prey. Alert for danger. Like a herd of antelope, all heads turned to look, The men perhaps out of desire, the women staring envy at them, Like the twin bores of a loaded gun. Mother and fetching daughter, From twenty feet, hard to tell which, one was one, or the other. Long blond hair, full and fine, both women tall, statuesque, moving with grace and ease. The mother my old friend, the daughter all grown up now, each having a smile that would light up anyone's darkness of mood. We greeted one another, hugs and hand shakes shared. A little conversation in the crowded room, Many pairs of eyes upon us there. Enchanted is the word that best describes my impression, this duo as intelligent and charming as they were beautiful to see. The mother sedate, classy and yet open and free, no pretense, no games just naturally at ease. As lovely as I remembered her to be. Her offspring, vivacious, spirited and bold, smart as whip, with a tongue that could draw blood if she desired it to. Chatty and funny, sure of herself, in the manner of beautiful people, yet not in a pompous way, merely Confident in self and her place in the world. She possessed all the character traits you would wish your own daughter to have. Her Mother had done well is raising her. Too soon they moved on, meeting and greeting others', out of my hearing and seeing. Some weeks have passed, a month or two and yet their strong impression has lingered, I can't keep them out of my mind. The Mother, my friend most of all.
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Nov 18, 2013
Nov 18, 2013 at 3:11 PM UTC
Mother and Daughter
Walking into the Reception Hall, they stole the show away, A regal pair they were, with a little bit of Butch and Sundance swagger shown. A confident air, not at all underserved. Dressed with just enough elegance. Their posture and hue , sleek and silky golden, like a duet of Cheetahs. Eyes alert and searching for prey. Alert for danger. Like a herd of antelope, all heads turned to look, The men perhaps out of desire, the women staring envy at them, Like the twin bores of a loaded gun. Mother and fetching daughter, From twenty feet, hard to tell which, one was one, or the other. Long blond hair, full and fine, both women tall, statuesque, moving with grace and ease. The mother my old friend, the daughter all grown up now, each having a smile that would light up anyone's darkness of mood. We greeted one another, hugs and hand shakes shared. A little conversation in the crowded room, Many pairs of eyes upon us there. Enchanted is the word that best describes my impression, this duo as intelligent and charming as they were beautiful to see. The mother sedate, classy and yet open and free, no pretense, no games just naturally at ease. As lovely as I remembered her to be. Her offspring, vivacious, spirited and bold, smart as whip, with a tongue that could draw blood if she desired it to. Chatty and funny, sure of herself, in the manner of beautiful people, yet not in a pompous way, merely Confident in self and her place in the world. She possessed all the character traits you would wish your own daughter to have. Her Mother had done well is raising her. Too soon they moved on, meeting and greeting others', out of my hearing and seeing. Some weeks have passed, a month or two and yet their strong impression has lingered, I can't keep them out of my mind. The Mother, my friend most of all.
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Nov 18, 2013
Nov 18, 2013 at 3:11 PM UTC
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