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I dislike returning to this hellish place From first step inside I sense my pulse race I start for one second to turn around Love and concern have my presence bound Everything in building looms like my worst nightmare Instead I try to focus on the one for which I care Like puzzle I ponder pieces of the past If I did things different would your breath have ended as fast? My whole life was spared by the reapers dark dose Heard whisper call but it never came too close Water came surging suddenly in sinking your soul to sleep Would have swam to rescue you but the sea was already too deep
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Oct 5, 2025
Oct 5, 2025 at 1:40 PM UTC
Sunken
I dislike returning to this hellish place From first step inside I sense my pulse race I start for one second to turn around Love and concern have my presence bound Everything in building looms like my worst nightmare Instead I try to focus on the one for which I care Like puzzle I ponder pieces of the past If I did things different would your breath have ended as fast? My whole life was spared by the reapers dark dose Heard whisper call but it never came too close Water came surging suddenly in sinking your soul to sleep Would have swam to rescue you but the sea was already too deep
About being back in the same hospital my mom died in...
AmandaKayBurke
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30/F/Alaska
Oct 5, 2025
Oct 5, 2025 at 1:40 PM UTC
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