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“I’m repulsed by you,” I say. Maybe that will make me feel better. Frozen, trying to remember memories because you made me hate them. Two sinners bonded, creating a friendship against everything in the commandment. Oh, look what we became One sinner gave it all. The other… saw it bare. The sinners? Both right. No wrong. The sinners are separated. One saw it as a joke. One swore it all. One never forgave. Both fell. The Devil laughed. I saw.
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Sep 17, 2025
Sep 17, 2025 at 4:51 PM UTC
THE OTHER SAW IT BARE
“I’m repulsed by you,” I say. Maybe that will make me feel better. Frozen, trying to remember memories because you made me hate them. Two sinners bonded, creating a friendship against everything in the commandment. Oh, look what we became One sinner gave it all. The other… saw it bare. The sinners? Both right. No wrong. The sinners are separated. One saw it as a joke. One swore it all. One never forgave. Both fell. The Devil laughed. I saw.
WROTE THIS ABOUT A FRIENDSHIP BREAK UP
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Sep 17, 2025
Sep 17, 2025 at 4:51 PM UTC
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