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I was walking in my backyard under cloudy skies Cool breeze tangled in my hair While chirping birds blessed my ears My cats’ soft meows melted away my stress A bitter neem leaf brushed against my head Pomegranates hung heavy, feeding my little joys Then the storm came, Sudden, heavy, loud Cats ran, neem bent, pomegranates burst And my peaceful walk became an escape
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Sep 12, 2025
Sep 12, 2025 at 9:33 AM UTC
Backyard Mood Swings
I was walking in my backyard under cloudy skies Cool breeze tangled in my hair While chirping birds blessed my ears My cats’ soft meows melted away my stress A bitter neem leaf brushed against my head Pomegranates hung heavy, feeding my little joys Then the storm came, Sudden, heavy, loud Cats ran, neem bent, pomegranates burst And my peaceful walk became an escape
Well well well it might look like a nature poem but its not🙃 I tried writing a poem in which i used symbols to represent my current situation. Cats=comfort but they ran away Neem= healing/bitterness Pomegranates= sweet but also blood like when burst.
Shambhavi
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19/F/Bihar,India
Sep 12, 2025
Sep 12, 2025 at 9:33 AM UTC
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