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In the hush between raindrops and stone, the hills lean inward, as if listening for a voice that never returned. Low clouds drag their grief across the shoulders of the land, a soft lament in vapor, layered like old letters, unsent. The trees don't speak— but their silence is fluent, a language of absence etched in shadow and bark. The sorrow here doesn't weep, it settles in the terrain like ash from a fire no one recalls lighting. A tragedy, perhaps, of the forgotten— the slow erosion of faces from stone, the fading of footsteps into deep green moss. And still, the wind carries a lament— a breath, a whisper, a suggestion that the past is not past, it merely sleeps beneath the skeins of brooding, hung cloud. [email protected]
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Sep 9, 2025
Sep 9, 2025 at 10:53 PM UTC
The Walończycy, Ghosts of Schreiberhau
In the hush between raindrops and stone, the hills lean inward, as if listening for a voice that never returned. Low clouds drag their grief across the shoulders of the land, a soft lament in vapor, layered like old letters, unsent. The trees don't speak— but their silence is fluent, a language of absence etched in shadow and bark. The sorrow here doesn't weep, it settles in the terrain like ash from a fire no one recalls lighting. A tragedy, perhaps, of the forgotten— the slow erosion of faces from stone, the fading of footsteps into deep green moss. And still, the wind carries a lament— a breath, a whisper, a suggestion that the past is not past, it merely sleeps beneath the skeins of brooding, hung cloud. [email protected]
A dedication to Agnes de Lods’ beautiful, "Raindrops in Schreiberhau" .... a modern artwork of this tradition of verse that echoes the patina of the past. Her lines: “I drink the peace, I eat the rustle of the wind, Absorbing the steady pattern of raindrops…” …feel like a continuation of the region’s artistic soul—where nature, memory, and longing converge.
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Sep 9, 2025
Sep 9, 2025 at 10:53 PM UTC
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